The strip of 4th avenue is known for its diversity, vintage style, and colors. Somewhere in the middle of the long avenue can be found the charming hidden gem, The Little Village. It consists of two main parts: Café Passe and the trio group of boutiques who sell anything from artwork to face products to jewelry. Before entering The Little Village, guests are immediately given the vibe as they see the eccentric colors outside of the shop along with the rustic looking signs that give off this vintage feel. Outside stood about four mini tables most likely meant for two. I love the accommodation for the outdoors so that people can meet for a coffee while people watching out on 4th avenue; there is always much to witness going on down there. However, it was a cold day outdoors so most everyone visiting The Village headed indoors.
1. The critical captions for your blog are not that creative but I think that if you changed them and added more description then it could catch the reader’s attention much more. I also think that if you changed the font, color, or font size of the caption it would stand out more because right now it is hard to tell where they are and it gets lost in the background.
ReplyDelete2. Throughout your entire blog, I feel like the “claim” you are trying to prove or what you are saying is when you first enter each area of this coffee shop. You talk about how different this shop is from the rest of Fourth Avenue and I think you describe that really well with the different adjectives you use to describe everything. I think you need to add a little more to each paragraph and maybe try focusing one thing rather then many different things about just one specific spot. Something you did very well on though is making your blog interesting for people to read. Everything flowed together and I enjoyed reading it instead of forcing myself to read it.
3. The relationship between all of the photos is you describing what happens when you enter each new room and what you see and how things are placed and basically just the first impression when you enter a new room of this café. At least I think this is what you are describing for all of the photos. I think that is why it flows so well because you stay on track and don’t confuse the reader with new thoughts every photo. You stick to the same idea, which I think is good and is clear.
4. I like the design of the blog but I think the background is too confusing and I think you should change it to a plain color because I think it will enhance the colors in the photos that much more. I would just search for more plain backgrounds that adding more design to your already busy blog.
5. Your choice of words is clear and concise in each of your paragraphs but I think that in some you should try to focus on one thing and really go into depth more because I think it will help keep your thoughts in order.
6. The great strengths of your blog is definitely how you keep it very personal and exciting to read instead of just writing boring sentence describing everything but never really going out of your way to add a little more flavor to your blog because you definitely do go out of your way to add more exciting words to all of your sentences. Especially in your introduction, the beginning sentence was really capturing.
ReplyDelete7. I think you should just re- read your whole blog and fix any small changes that you think need extra attention such as finishing a thought out that maybe needs a little more description, or just changing your thought on something. If you change the background, I think that will also help your blog and if you add more interesting captions, then your blog will definitely stand out just by the way talk in your blog.
8. I think the introduction was very personal, catchy, and enthusiastic. You definitely showed how this café is more then just a café and I think that is what will draw the reader in because that is what drew me in. I think the main idea you are trying to get across is just how there is more to this little café then people know.
9. Since you don’t have a conclusion, I can’t necessarily comment but I think that if you just make it end on a good note just like you started off with your introduction you will be fine. Just describe again while people should visit this café and why it is an important part of Fourth Avenue.